I got some feedback on the astrolabe story. Some of it i’ve implemented, and the rest I’m still mulling over. I find it really hard to go back to a story I’ve finished and add on new materials. It becomes something of a whole in my mind.
Anyhow, for now I’ve moved on to another story, this time one about a dancer and a dressmaker. It’s set in a sort of secondary world inspired by the Nusantara/ Indochina region but has no magic yet. It might intersect in some way with some reading I’ve been doing on migrant workers here in Beirut. Let’s see.
Today is Eid.